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Honorable Mention
breaking spirits
Frank Faust

it is a suburban gathering
an occasion of rituals

the food is nibblies
chips and nuts
cheese dip

the drink is as you brought it
beer and spirits
potent pre-mixed sweet syrup
eskies against the wall for self-service
next to the container for empty cans
and the bin for sundry rubbish

the host and hostess are attentive
there is an element of compulsion
to the drinking rites

have you got a drink
how much is left in your glass
do you want a re-fill
why are you drinking so slowly
are you piking

a little dancing is happening on the porch
enthusiastic gyration
to the greatest hits of the sixties
the seventies
the eighties
anytime you can imagine

the guests are a generational mixture
of parents approaching and beyond
a half century of years
and a smattering of offspring
late teens and early twenties
there is pride in emulation of each others abilities
drinking in competition
none will be left behind this night
whole families can be proud

our man wanders away
the single
the loner
sits solitary beside the brazier
of flicking yellow-orange
holly-leaf flames
never still but so hungry
climbing to consume the darkness
threatening domination
so long as the fuel will last

he watches the small groups
filters the chatter of convergent conversations
through the too-loudness of music
notes the urgency of the drinking imperative
wonders what she is doing
if she is ok
whether he has done the right thing
choosing this
tries to still the dancing flames
anything
to examine the dynamic
to work out what it means

the host has found him
alone is not an acceptable state
the drink must be replenished
the party rejoined
come
come

by four in the morning
the retching has started
this too is part of the ritual
the logical conclusion
to a gladiatorial contest of physical stamina
against the known potency
of beer and spirits

the spirit appears to have been beaten at last
he feels slightly ill

~

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